Jimmy
4/30/2013 01:39:40 am

Many Pictures. And the pronunciations and the organizations are quite good. One causes after one, and then talking about the suggestions.
The video will be better if you can add some sound effects/background music and some moving objects/animations.

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pan
4/30/2013 02:52:12 am

the organization of the writing is quit good,
however, your voice has not change so that some people may feel boring

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Chris
4/30/2013 03:03:18 am

The structure and the pronunciation is quit good, however the volume is not very stable.

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